Friday, September 5, 2008

My First Article

Is School Lunch Really Healthy?

Today at lunch I did a survey to see which lunch line students liked best. I asked 60 students. The results are in:

Extreme Line: 20
Side Lines: 11
Sub Line: 8
Pizza Line: 21

I also surveyed 20 students on how many days a week they pack their lunch and here is the results:

5 days: 7
3-4 days: 7
1-2 days: 6


So as you see, a lot of kids like the pizza line and almost as many enjoy the extreme line. As we know, the pizza line serves pizza and the extreme line serves a small dish like chicken nuggets or cheese stuffed pizza crusts with some form of potato or fry, usually. Fries and pizza are not healthy foods. The problem with that not being healthy is that a lot of kids like that line and if they eat it every day they will become obese. More and more of America’s teens and pre-teens are becoming obese and being diagnosed with diabetes at an early age. Kids that are diagnosed with diabetes are forced to take shots with insulin in them every day. So if our school continues to serve pizza and fries every day there could become serious problems.

In a recent interview with a former cafeteria worker we asked some groundbreaking questions. Our first question to the lunch worker was, have you ever burned yourself while working in the caf? She replied with a yes. We then asked her, do you have to pay or make your own lunch? She said no, it's free, and we make our own lunch because it is part of the job .The third question we asked was, do hair nets bother you? She gave us quite an explanation, "When I worked at Brandywine Springs, we did not wear hair nets, but baseball caps, because I have very short hair. When I worked in the Red Clay bake shop, yes, I had to wear one. It was bothersome, but you could get special made ones, that were less noticable. And the last question we asked the former lunch worker was, did you enjoy your job? And her answer was, "Yeah it was fun, hard work. You had to be fast, and do a lot of heavy lifting.

--i made some changes so if anyone wants to review my article, it's completely done now.

10 comments:

The Editor said...

This is a good article, however, I think you should include people who pack their lunch. Otherwise, besides a few minor grammar things (and that isn't really your job anyway, it's the other editors' and mine) it's good.

Reilly =) said...

Hey! I like the artical, but I think it might make more of an impact if you added a nutrition fact, one of the "unhealthy" ones. Also, if you possibly interview a lunch staff on their thoughts, but that might be hard.

Sarah said...

Is School Lunch Really Healthy?

Today at lunch I did a survey to see which lunch line students liked best; I asked 60 students and the results are in:

Extreme Line: 20
Side Lines: 11
Sub Line: 8
Pizza Line: 21

I also surveyed 20 students on how many days a week they pack their lunch and here is the results:

5 days: 7
3-4 days: 7
1-2 days: 6


So as you see, a lot of kids like the pizza line and almost as many enjoy the extreme line. As we know, the pizza line serves pizza and the extreme line serves a small dish like chicken nuggets or cheese stuffed pizza crusts with some form of potato or fry, usually. Fries and pizza are not healthy foods. The problem with that not being healthy is that a lot of kids like that line and if they eat it every day they will become obese. More and more of America’s teens and pre-teens are becoming obese and being diagnosed with diabetes at an early age. Kids that are diagnosed with diabetes are forced to take shots with insulin in them every day. So if our school continues to serve pizza and fries every day there could become serious problems and that’s why I think we should start changing now.
-Sam

here is the finished article

Sarah said...

hey a. copy editor (or 2 u want 2 b called the 7th grade copy editor, cuz tech. im the chief since im older.....)
i stink @ typing so if i type a mistake just tell me.....
thats cool u kno how u have 2 blogs, well i do 2, so maybe u want 2 write sam's newspaper blog instead b/c the editor mixed mine up yesterday....haha
have u done any of the 7th grade articles???
i did urs and greta's i dont kno if i did any other's though
im free 2morow nite so i was thinking of doing some articles
if u need a break or help jsut tell me
8th grade is moving along very slowy!!!!!
well, i'll tlak to u l8r

Sarah said...

sam,
they SHOULD do that, u rn't supposed to have to go looking for something to proofread....talk to mr.mayo today in school....maybe he can talk to htem o tuesday
for rite now just write ur own article, but clear it w/ the co-editor (which ever subject it falls in2) and ok and it w/ them or they wont print it unfortunately.....
i hope this helps....ttyl
also, wat mistakes did u fix on my article??/ didnt c any, maybe i cant just c them b/c its my own article
do u save the articles when u'r done w/ them? u prob. shuld if u dont, maybe on a flash drive? or ur account here, just 2 have a back up in case something happens
well, i'll ttyl

Sarah said...

also, if u look in the review my articles on mr. mayo's blog
u can find some articles that r done, then go 2 sam k.'s blog and ask him if u can proofread like 2 of them.....i need something 2 do also! XD

Sarah said...

yes, i am her daughter

Sarah said...

oh cool
i asked her if she remembered u, she said yea

Reilly =) said...

Hey SAM,

My mom knows someone who worked in the caf. 2 years ago. If you give me a list of questions, I can ask her for you, and she'll give honest answers. Let me know!

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